tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post5917429842890932734..comments2024-03-08T22:58:36.895-06:00Comments on KSCollier/Author: Second Campaigner Challenge by Rachael HarrieAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-18316422221358446022011-10-11T20:39:33.862-05:002011-10-11T20:39:33.862-05:00You did a great job here--the fear is palpable. I ...You did a great job here--the fear is palpable. I really enjoyed your piece!<br /><br />#189Karen deBlieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11833882790709316409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-82857780841556930222011-10-06T11:35:07.148-05:002011-10-06T11:35:07.148-05:00Amazing! And I commend your moral persistence! Tha...Amazing! And I commend your moral persistence! Thanks for sharing. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428537878590963832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-14411623072976376832011-10-03T17:55:27.314-05:002011-10-03T17:55:27.314-05:00Great story, KS! I was ready to run, too! ;)Great story, KS! I was ready to run, too! ;)Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-45379686489032189652011-10-03T06:19:58.808-05:002011-10-03T06:19:58.808-05:00This is very nice! And doing it with dialogue is e...This is very nice! And doing it with dialogue is especially commendable. <br /><br />Great job.Ronald L. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03649046677631873728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-11860731245133685622011-09-30T18:58:06.315-05:002011-09-30T18:58:06.315-05:00I loved your dialogue. Great take on the challenge...I loved your dialogue. Great take on the challenge.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-58747598795093286282011-09-30T00:16:06.848-05:002011-09-30T00:16:06.848-05:00This was fun. I liked how you were able to use a ...This was fun. I liked how you were able to use a personal experience to come up with a fun story. (PS, thanks for your comments on my blog)Marcyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00336729074703850201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-45194421564937295962011-09-29T17:59:35.879-05:002011-09-29T17:59:35.879-05:00I love your entry! :) It's one of the few I...I love your entry! :) It's one of the few I've come across with younger characters.<br /><br /><a href="http://thegoldeneaglesblog.blogspot.com/2011/09/imago-has-finally-been-foundor-not.html" rel="nofollow">My entry.</a>Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-78018637577340383012011-09-29T14:29:03.027-05:002011-09-29T14:29:03.027-05:00I had to go back and read it to make sure that all...I had to go back and read it to make sure that all the words were in it. Good job. Mine is #153 BTW.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08533913253403252799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-39714027818474023152011-09-28T22:42:15.846-05:002011-09-28T22:42:15.846-05:00I like that the never looked back! Mine is #29I like that the never looked back! Mine is #29Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-80942685728726903932011-09-28T19:54:03.550-05:002011-09-28T19:54:03.550-05:00I can't believe how well you incorporated the ...I can't believe how well you incorporated the words and kept the atmosphere so young. Really nice.Kurt Hartwighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12857036723957923656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-7356191529795748112011-09-28T19:10:36.136-05:002011-09-28T19:10:36.136-05:00Awesome story. Now I need to know what was happeni...Awesome story. Now I need to know what was happening in there! Great job on incorporating all the required words. <br /><br />I'm # 157Author A.O. Pearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09522726537375775560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-58033423932612831802011-09-28T14:32:56.901-05:002011-09-28T14:32:56.901-05:00Thank you Brinda. I thought yours was fabulous.Thank you Brinda. I thought yours was fabulous.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-470901972990537092011-09-28T13:50:00.374-05:002011-09-28T13:50:00.374-05:00Great job, KS. I could almost hear the squish of t...Great job, KS. I could almost hear the squish of the shoes. :)Brindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09809660700359597836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-91700756603485164082011-09-28T05:39:00.741-05:002011-09-28T05:39:00.741-05:00Great read. I loved the voice of your characters....Great read. I loved the voice of your characters.Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-76250185061361800772011-09-28T01:09:25.593-05:002011-09-28T01:09:25.593-05:00Thanks Ciara I feel the same. It has been fun re...Thanks Ciara I feel the same. It has been fun reading how much 5 words can change a story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-77764291086647051842011-09-27T21:47:59.085-05:002011-09-27T21:47:59.085-05:00I like your work for this challenge. I'm love ...I like your work for this challenge. I'm love reading everyone unique twists. :) Great job.Ciarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15628488753277495111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-36391553499195559682011-09-27T14:16:33.446-05:002011-09-27T14:16:33.446-05:00Thank you everyone for your comments. Like everyo...Thank you everyone for your comments. Like everyone else who entered, I found the words crazy hard to use. I can't tell you how many times I read and reread the definition. Finally, I started getting the feel of the words. I love learning new words and loved the opportunity to try.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-77650536447604019322011-09-27T12:41:26.518-05:002011-09-27T12:41:26.518-05:00I had to get out my dictionary! LOL Thank you op...I had to get out my dictionary! LOL Thank you opening the door;-)MamaLadyBughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09894033667893450443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-64285487629300482312011-09-27T10:18:22.396-05:002011-09-27T10:18:22.396-05:00I hope that's not in Florida, which is where I...I hope that's not in Florida, which is where I live. Good writing. Good luck.writing and living by Richard P Hugheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03814139767151989286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-83477044327844202942011-09-27T00:39:51.133-05:002011-09-27T00:39:51.133-05:00You are the queen of understatement! Loved reading...You are the queen of understatement! Loved reading this.D.J. Kirkbyhttp://djkirkby.co.uk/2011/09/imago-dragonflies/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-83544458460581580212011-09-26T14:54:37.162-05:002011-09-26T14:54:37.162-05:00This was a fun read. Reminded me a lot of books I ...This was a fun read. Reminded me a lot of books I used to read in grade school. Loved the voice of your characters.<br /><br />Great job, K.S.Collier! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-15090940686202902842011-09-26T09:19:45.168-05:002011-09-26T09:19:45.168-05:00yuck! where could they be? hope they make it!yuck! where could they be? hope they make it!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-85750569248043652342011-09-25T16:52:55.611-05:002011-09-25T16:52:55.611-05:00Actually it is something that happened to me when ...Actually it is something that happened to me when I was younger only it went a little differently. <br /><br />I was stupidly barefoot (I lived that way) and stepped in an area where they used to burn garbage and my foot sunk into the soil and I burned by foot terribly. It was blistered before I got home. That sure broke me of going barefoot, at least until my foot healed. Hehehe!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-28070376948706200612011-09-25T14:40:03.843-05:002011-09-25T14:40:03.843-05:00Sounds like a great teen adventure! ; )Sounds like a great teen adventure! ; )Sheri L. Swift, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08585820531737824211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5134640386158990269.post-25443606693733506382011-09-25T06:37:04.031-05:002011-09-25T06:37:04.031-05:00I want to see what happens next. Great job. :)I want to see what happens next. Great job. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com